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Wednesday, January 28, 2009
到公园去散步
一来到公园的时候,我觉得好舒服。 看到绿油油的草地,高大的树木和五颜六色的花朵,真是漂亮极了! 红红的花朵好像天上的太阳。 高大的树木好像遮太阳的雨伞。花儿也像香水一样香。 鸟儿也唱着动听的歌。 啊!公园是我们能够享受的一个地方。
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WY
February 3, 2009 at 10:32 PM
嘉忆,你写得很好!
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FELICIA
February 4, 2009 at 7:15 AM
你写得满好的,可是没有开头.记得写比较多一点字.
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chen wei
February 4, 2009 at 10:07 PM
恭喜你,你没有错字!!!!
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智慧
February 4, 2009 at 10:18 PM
有啦!‘油油 写成悠悠:)
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Jackson
February 7, 2009 at 8:20 PM
恭喜你,没有错字!
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Jackson
February 7, 2009 at 8:25 PM
请到我的博客看我喜欢的文章。
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嘉忆,你写得很好!
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ReplyDelete恭喜你,没有错字!
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